Some of our Writing

Over the past couple of weeks we have been looking at how to write descriptions using adjectives (Describing words) and Similes (Using like or as to make comparisons i.e. As blue as the sky.)

My friend Mr. Sam.

My friend has brown eyes and white hair. He has brown skin and is taller than me.
Mr. Sam likes to watch The Simpsons. He sings and plays the guitar. I like to listen
Mr Sam loves rugby and supports the Hurricanes.

By Sean


My friend Cheyanne.

Her hair is dark as the night sky. She has two sisters and one brother. She’s got a big smile like a mini banana. She has the most beautiful dark brown eyes like bark on a tree. Her favorite color is red. Her favorite game is golden child.

By Kaya

My friend Josh R.

My friend is as fast as a cheetah he has won a certificate for running. He has got brown hair like a bear and he has brown eyes like chocolate.

By Armani